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Let's Write in 2013
January 13, 2013 Writing Prompt:
"A man is given the ability to go back in time and change one event in his life."
January 13, 2013 Writing Prompt:
"A man is given the ability to go back in time and change one event in his life."
“Travelling the Dusty Road of Revenge”
Walter’s dingy once-white lab coat rucked up around his belt
on the left side and bulged gently over his pot belly. A diligent research
scientist, he was no great shakes in the manner of personal hygiene. Granted,
he had not descended to the level of a homeless person with no access to
showers, but Walter seldom noticed if his lab coat had a rip, or needed a good
laundering. Most of the time he did not even remember to polish his wingtips,
unless he had the scheduled semi-annual Meeting with the Investors. He could
accomplish a daily shower, sometimes morning and night, and had managed that
level of personal care since high school; and he remembered to shave--every
couple of days. Other than that, his standard uniform was dark dress slacks from
a suit, shirt and tie, and that dingy, now off-color, lab coat, in a shade no
manufacturer of medical clothing would ever acknowledge.
It was nearly midnight, on a Friday, and Walter stood with
his Google Pad in left hand, right hand oh-so-subtly adjusting the dial on the
computer console before him. Lab procedures-and good common sense-dictated that
neither of the researchers work with the time-lotron alone, but tonight, Walter
was breaking that rule, and breaking it intentionally. Walter Mondon was
traveling back in time.
The forty-three-year-old physicist wasn’t motivated by some
selfless intent, some desire to eradicate a historical tragedy. He wasn’t
reversing chronology in order to disengage John Wilkes Booth’s trigger finger
moments before the assassination in 1865 of President Abraham Lincoln, nor to
swerve the conquering hordes of Genghis Khan or Attila the Hun. Not for Walter
Mondon the estimable desire to prevent terrorists from flying planes on
September 11, 2001; nor to dissuade the “civilizing” wave of conquest by
Alexander the Great. He wasn’t even traveling back in time to save President
Garfield, nor President Kennedy; not to assassinate Hitler before he could
arise to power. No: Walter’s intent was purely selfish, and purely ugly. Walter
had revenge on his mind.
Born in 1970, Walter came into this world the classical nerd:
gifted, logical, lacking a social skill set, but a technological whiz.
Naturally his school years were fraught with isolation, loneliness, and
ostracism; only the Chess Club members got along with him, and that’s not to
say they enjoyed fraternizing with him. No one else, except his mom, a single
parent, could or would associate with him, although a few of the teachers
enjoyed him. The shop teacher, for example, called on Walter any time a piece
of equipment needed calibration; the physics and chemistry teachers considered
him a near genius, if a trifle reckless and even dangerous; the English and history
teachers just threw up their hands at his speed-reading ability but still
awarded him high marks. Walter was on track for valedictorian candidacy,
pulling down straight A grades in every subject but Physical Ed, in which of
course, typically, he was a klutz.
In May of his senior year, 1988, Walter received a totally
unexpected phone call at home on a Tuesday evening. His mother had returned
from her job in the city, but had gone out again to do her weekly grocery run,
so Walter was home alone practicing physics experiments in the shed, which he
had converted into his own little office. He and his mother lived in a small
suburb in Northwestern Ohio; perhaps if Walter had been able to attend a
technical high school such as in New York City or Chicago, his life might have
had a more positive outcome. Walter heard the phone ringing, but ignored it, as
he assumed it was for his mom. After she returned, the phone rang twice more,
and the second time, she called out to him.
“Walter! Phone!”
Bewildered (no one had ever called him except for wrong
numbers, jokesters from school, and the time the Chess Club faculty advisor had
called to arrange bus transportation to an out-of-town regional match) but he
was amenable and obedient, and so came into the house to answer it. The voice
on the other hand knocked his logical brain out of its ball park.
“Walter? It’s Charleyne—Charleyne from school?”
“Uhh—sure, I know who you are.”
“Walter, I need a favour to ask you.”
“Uhh—sure, okay, if I can I guess.”
“I need an escort for the Senior Prom next weekend.”
Dead and utter silence ensued. Finally, Charleyne spoke
again:
“Walter? Are you there?”
“Ummm, yes, here. Okay.”
“Great! Thanks! See you a week from Friday, I’ll drive!” and
she hung up.
Once Walter’s brain had re-engaged in its logical mode, he
informed his mother, who managed to restrain her excitement, and she suggested
she could order a tuxedo for him from Chicago’s Marshall Field’s, through her
position as buyer at the city department store, Barker & Sons.
Walter walked through the ensuing ten days in a cloud, unable
to believe his sudden good fortune. He was going to the Senior Prom, with a
girl who, if not in the upper tier of campus cuties, was still well-known,
well-liked, a pretty girl known for her constant smile, good attitude, and
generosity to her friends. Charleyne Parker was the kind of girl who always
made others smile, simply by her good cheer.
On the night of the Senior Prom, Charleyne arrived in her dad’s
BMW only ten minutes later than she had promised, and the drive to the high
school gym was conducted in near silence, mostly because Walter, who lacked
social skills, had no words to offer as small talk. Additionally, he was still
in shock, and still believing that this entire situation was on the up-and-up.
Dreams do die hard, even if one never knew before that the dream even existed.
Once at the gym, where the Prom was held, Walter paced around
in a state of fog, sipping at a cup of undoctored punch while Charleyne cruised
the gym, laughing and joking with her friends, occasionally stealing a sly
corner-of-the-eye glance at Walter, whose shocked blur had temporarily
eradicated the memory of the little prank he had played several weeks earlier,
after the first announcements of Senior Prom had begun to riffle through the
school halls. Walter, a mechanical as well as science genius, had rearranged
the gym’s sprinkler system, all “in good fun,” and for practice, not really
planning to ever use his alteration. The idea had come to him after reading a
dog-eared paperback of “Carrie” he had picked up at a neighborhood yard sale.
Walter had forgotten what he had done, until tonight.
After his second cup of too-sweet punch, he had left the gym
on a restroom break, and when he returned, couldn’t find Charleyne anywhere;
but he did notice, even in his exalted mental state, the snickering of her
friends and hangers-on. Finally he became aware of the glances toward the fire
exit door, propped open for the duration of the dance, and he found his feet
impelled to head that way. Nothing seemed out of order when he reached the
door, but he stepped outside and heard a girl’s loud laughter, the kind most
folks would recognize as a girl under the influence of both alcohol and weed.
It sounded familiar, but at first he couldn’t place it, unattuned as he was to
society or to the feelings or signals of others. Behind him in the gym, the
laughter there intensified, and rather than return, he walked to the side of
the gym, and looked around. Over in a dark corner of the lot was a silver ’65 Mustang
Cobra, shining in the moonlight; and leaning against it were a tall dark-haired
young man in jeans and a black T-shirt whom Walter didn’t recognize, swigging
from a silver flask—and hugging on Walter’s “date.” In shock, he stepped up so
that the shrubbery hid him, and just then, Charleyne, laughing again, turned
back toward the gym. He heard her say, “We sure fooled him—and my parents! They’ll
never realize I met up with you, Jason!” as she followed that remark up with a
lip-sucking kiss.
Walter froze—then turned and rushed out of the shrubbery and
around the corner; he was not going to go back inside, oh no! Hurrying along
the front wall of the gym, he entered the hall door on the opposite side, and
sped down the corridor of offices toward the double gym doors. Just outside, he
reached up and opened the glass over the fire alarm lever, yanking it. No siren
issued—Walter had disconnected it; no signal was sent to the local Fire
Department (also disengaged), but inside the vast gym first shrieks, then
screams ensued, as the sprinkler system activated and poured down upon the
promgoers: pig’s blood from a bladder Walter had earlier installed.
Walter listened for a while, while his heart shriveled even
more and the evil seeds of selfishness grew inside his soul. Then he turned and
paced back down the hall, exiting the building and passing behind it, to walk a
short cut home. Walter, of course, was readily pegged as the culprit, and very
early on Sunday his mother received a phone call from high school Principal
Everidge. Walter’s grades were sufficiently high that he would be allowed to
graduate—but it would be in absentia (his mother could pick up the diploma at
the Superintendent’s Office downtown the week after graduation), and there
would be no question of the valedictorian position—not for Walter. In return,
the School Board waived charging his mother for repairs to the sprinkler
system; they were just glad now to see him gone.
In
September, Walter flew to California and enrolled in the Advanced Physics
Program at Stanford, where he excelled—and kept his head down and his
machinations to himself.
In 2000, Walter and a fellow Stanford alumni, Jeremy O’Ballon,
founded the Physics Research Associates of Palo Alto LLC, and began garnering
corporate and defense contracts. On the side, the two nerdish scientists began
development of the “time-lotron,” a device to reverse chronology and quite
literally, “travel back in time.” Jeremy held visions of defense applications,
and anticipated a trillion-dollar payoff from the Department of Defense when it
had been completed and tested. Walter had other plans. Walter was going back in
time, all right, back to May of 1979, and Walter was going to ensure that
Charleyne Parker and her scaggy “hood” boyfriend were in the gym, at just the
right time; and this time—the bladder wouldn’t be loaded with pig’s blood, but
with a lethal combination of human blood and hydrochloric acid. Walter was “going
back” for revenge.
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